Nice Job man you have out done yourself also what's the song ID I would like to use this song for geometry dash level if its ok but keep going this is AWSOME
PS: can u teach me how to make music???
Wow! You've outdone yourself with this one.
the intro is a bit too long
some caution against making your buildup too long - most people, like reading resumes - only have a 7 second long attention span - if it feels like it's dragging out they are going to stop listening or reflect on it negatively.
This song is.. okay. It's a bit boring esp. for the dance genre - and it takes wayyyyy too long to buildup.
I agree with Neko that the vocals don't really fit it. Mostly because of the effects you used on them which makes them feel grating.
I can see what you were going for with the middle part, but that 8-bit sound is a bit too weak.
You also need to work on your mastering - I hear crackles in this song and things lack proper placement in the stereo field in parts.
The percussion is also very lackluster imo. Overall, needs a lot of work.
Hi Shawn thanks for review
It’s a track designed to be track 14 out of a 15 track synthwave/chillwave electronica set. So the drawn out buildup and outro and general chilled out body of the song is by design and tailored for the feel needed at its place in the set.
The melody and buildup are nice and the filtered synth is not bad. The only thing feeling out of place is the vocoded vocals which I feel clash with the rhythm a bit. Otherwise, chill and calm piece.
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