7s allll around
well before i say anything, i just think that this is more breakbeatish than dnb, jst to tell u.
wellll first i think everything in general sounds a little unclear/distorted but mostly okay. lol.
the drum pattern was nice but u jst kept repeating it for like forever. id like to see some more variation than an occasional 1-2 measure breakdown or something.
the bassline was good, but the synth u used could be better. it didnt sound like it fit with the song, and id like it if it was more mono than stereo. also, the second melody of the bassline that comes in like 1/4 thru could be changed into an actual lead with a different, higher synth rather than act as it does now, and that would be cooler.
i think that you could make this song more interesting by adding more melodies and making this either more relaxed or emotional, if you ask me. lastly the ending didnt seem to fit very well with the weird lo-fi tom things, but thats minor.
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