Nice Drum Pattern
I like the programming of the beat and the overall balance of the track, but i reckon if you used that beat sequencing with better samples you could have a much better track. The sounds could definately be more diverse and man that ride sample just tops off that gm midi drumset sound i`d lose it.
Apart from that though like i said i really liked the programming of the beat itself cool and funky..
ye, dis def' needs more work. thanx for the review.
Couldn't think of anything to put here :P
Great beginning, but it didn't really fit the song in my opinion. The song itself was good, but I didn't really like the synths that were used, however they did get the job done. The kick could've used a bit more, "bump." I could barely hear it throughout the track. Other than that, I enjoyed it. It was funky, and cool.
The ending was also really neat. A job well done 5/5 - out of hatred for zero voters (I still would've given you a high score otherwise).
7s allll around
well before i say anything, i just think that this is more breakbeatish than dnb, jst to tell u.
wellll first i think everything in general sounds a little unclear/distorted but mostly okay. lol.
the drum pattern was nice but u jst kept repeating it for like forever. id like to see some more variation than an occasional 1-2 measure breakdown or something.
the bassline was good, but the synth u used could be better. it didnt sound like it fit with the song, and id like it if it was more mono than stereo. also, the second melody of the bassline that comes in like 1/4 thru could be changed into an actual lead with a different, higher synth rather than act as it does now, and that would be cooler.
i think that you could make this song more interesting by adding more melodies and making this either more relaxed or emotional, if you ask me. lastly the ending didnt seem to fit very well with the weird lo-fi tom things, but thats minor.
check my stuff plz!! :D
yeah, i know this track has flaws all over the place, it needs alot of work yet. The beat does get repetitive, and the bassline aint that good. i dont think i'll be reposting this one, cause i'm sick of reposts. i'll try making better tracks. as for the breakbeatish thing, there ain't no breakbeat section on newgrounds :). Anyways, thanks for the review, will check your stuff out right away.
whoa. i love the panning effects in the beginning. this DnB is far superior than mine lame ass loop. and i just want to let you know that if you had submitted this track a bit earlier, perhaps it would be getting the recignition it deserves! really
hey trickmixer, thanks for the review. Don't put yourself down, just keep practicing. I am putting myself down a lot, and it doesn't help. We all gots loads to learn yet. Keep it UP!