Stimulating work. Mix is clear. Very quirky sound design. The "k-k-k-k-come on!" vocals instigate a bit more energy than the rest of the piece could back up. Atmosphere and mood are really cool, especially when those ghostly synths start sneaking in there at around 1:15. Overall, the composition was a bit too experimental for my tastes, and the vocals get a little tired after a while. I would've liked to hear a bit more melodic content or dynamism. Maybe that's just my judging-mode self talking, though. It's a fun piece. Seems like you explore quite a variety of genres, Jacob. I'll check out more of your work soon. Keep at it! ;)
Author Comments
Come on, already
jeez
Jacob responds:
Oh, it's all terrible. But I do like to play around!
I was trying to get the "C'mon" to pull me out of the comparatively ambient background, sort of like the feeling of your name being called while daydreaming.
I want to play with that concept more, see if I can make it more effective. It'd probably help to take time to create a dream-state, eventually bringing in a voice (preferably more present and hi-fi) to abruptly pull you out, either to supplant a climax, or after the piece has concluded. Could be cool!
Thanks for the review. You always have great feedback.
Hell yeah dude. This is amazing :D
Jacob responds:
Thanks, man! I do like the style employed here. I think I'd like to do more of it.
C'mon C'mon C'mon C'mon C'mon C'mon C'mon C'mon C'mon
Jacob responds:
C-c-c-c'mon
C'mon
Jacob responds:
Come oooonnnnnnnnn
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