I'm not sure if this is intentionally low-fi, but the drums are way down in the mix. The leads are overly loud, and the mix itself is pretty quiet. I also really don't like the strings. Kinda seems like the chords are just ported up and down. I would do some research on music theory, particularly avoiding parallel 5ths. Kinda makes your track sound generic as is, and not in the generic background theme kinda way. Granted, I'm listening on laptop speakers, but still. Needs lots of shaping up. Melodically, it's pretty suitable as a background or menu theme.