Good start, my dude. Got a familiar chord progression going there, haha. The levels are pretty good, and I like your sound choices, those bells are nice. My main criticism would be that the song lacks any melodies, you've just got your chord progression (and at one point, an arpeggio). I would try and focus on making your overall structures a little more interesting, I think - might want to make your transitions a bit shorter too, there feels like a fair bit of downtime in the song.
Otherwise, good work on this so far :) Hope to see you uploading more and improving!
theapple111 
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