Nice sound

you really have something here that you can polish onto and make even better, but what I want to say here is that this was just some good sound you have. Wow I am an instant fan of your work now it really just speaks to you with the sound here Now I do think this could be longer and more focus on your main sound. Indeed this is some good work, You have a new fan here and will look for much more of your sound, but as for this one here today you make some amazing work, so keep that up.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think this could be longer and more focus on your main sound.

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Getting a real Red Hot Chili Peppers vibe here. :) Intentional? The two layers don't always seem to match - especially in the beginning, and the sound volume fluctuates a bit as you play, probably a bit unevenly played, but I really like the vibe otherwise. Clean recording quality and pretty heartfelt guitarplay. Not bad!

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Yeah I kind of get a feeling for some end credits of a horror film or calm moment during a post apocalyptic game. Its good quality man. Even adding in some calm vocals like very low vocals could add a bit to it.

As simple as it is, it would actually work quite decently if it were expanded upon and used for calm music in an apocalyptic type game, such as Metro (even though that game is never really calm)