I see this as some pumped-up fire/lava level boss type of theme.
The composition itself is great.
Here are some of the things that need work:
- Didn't dig the 'guitar' sound (I'd even cut some low end on guitar so that the bass can breathe even more) and the whole song is slightly overcompressed.
- I'd work more on drums and transitions overall. I'm sure it would add more energy. Whole set of drums is in the center of the track, even the hi-hats. Try panning them slightly off the center and add maybe more perc to make it more interesting.
Melodies and sounds that occur throughout the song are a really nice touch.
I feel like here's a great track that, that sits behind an average mix.
Id suggest learning more about EQ-ing in general, panning and dynamic range.
Nevertheless I enjoyed your composition, this whole review's for the purpose of getting better and progressing.
I'll repeat once more. Composition's great.
There's a whole lot of people who have the equipment and know how to mix extremely good but have quite poor composing skills. I think that that's far greater 'problem' than not knowing how to make a perfect mix.
Keep it up!