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This is my 4th completed track for the album "Taken For Grant[ed]" which I am composing utilizing nothing but Grant's beats. Enjoy.

[Lyrics]

Do you have any idea
How painful it is
Just to stand here next to you?
N try to mind my own biz

Ness?

Can you tell me what the hell is with this?

Gimme one good reason why I'm in this
I can't see a way that I can win this
Feels just like a sin, this

[Echo] This, this

Mind is blown
But my heart is flat broke
And my debt just keeps growin
Shovin bills down my throat til I choke
And I pay em but they treat me like a joke
I cannot see a way, but intuition I invoke

To find peace

In another piece of me
But I cannot find a way
to make the pieces feel free

See?

It's just a battle with my mind
But when my spirit gets broken
The head HAS to unwind

In the end,

They never seem to see
That the broken bits're reflecting
A piece of a better me

[Chorus]
Do you see
What the broken people see
When the broken people
Beg
For a way they can be free

Oh

Do you see
What the people never see
When they think they know the reason
That the broken people bleed, oh x2

I'm broken

I say it over again
As I bleed another piece of myself
To all my friends

Make amends

Because I don't focus on them
When they never even try
To understand the messages that I send

But hey, look I'm just fine
I'll just write down more lyrics
Repeat one more line
I feel one more rhythm
My mind starts to shine

Then my phone goes off
And I'm back at the starting line

[Chorus]

I never wanted to try this
I never did

And I embodimentize this
I'm like a kid

With a piece of a reasoning for a treason
That left his little heart broken, though nobody seems to see him

Free him

From the cage inside of me, please
I don't wanna see what he can see

Or

Leave me be
To the demons in my mind
I keep a piece of me broken
And pray for it one more time

[Chorus]