First of all, I don't like swearing, and 00:25, so yeah. -1 star for me. Second, this is pretty cool! It's not as energetic as I usually like my music, but that is 100% personal preference. I really like the warped-ness of the growls. It actually reminds me a lot of Excision and Space Lace's "Throwin' Elbows" ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BS87krWeYpA ).

Speaking of Throwin' Elbows, there's something about that song's drops that I think contributes to the overall awesomeness of the song. None of the noises in Throwin' Elbows are all that short. I think that if you don't pack your noises in so tight in your first drop, it could be really awesome.

Another quick thought is that you should make the second drop more "awesome" than the first. (Personally, I would have switched around the first and second drops in this song.) I think that having the second drop be more "awesome" in some way makes the whole track flow nicely, because it makes people surprised when they get to the second drop, especially if the buildups are similar.

So yeah. Sounds pretty good!