Intro: Liked the idea - I like it when bands do an intro or brake down that has a chaotic feel but actually lines up rhythmically - I would keep the rhythm in mind as that is a little off in this version but Im sure this is a WiP as you've stated. Riff is nice, might have it go downwards on the scale instead of up every other time. I know you wanted that punk sound, but my ears wanna hear that full, mushy metal tone. Cool track.