Not bad, nut needs some variations, and the 1:48-1:54 fragment was too long, feels uncomfortable, it probably would've sounded better if it was shorter
Author Comments
If you could fly (not in an airplane or other man-made vehicle, silly) this is how you would feel.
sapoman responds:
Cool, I will revisit this song and rearrange it.
Not bad.
I feel like you need some kind of catch in this one.
Seems too random with this piano melody.
Few suggestions:
Although I do love the dnb loop, I'd work more on transitions and changes within the song (starting from bass, drums too) and maybe adding some FX so it becomes more interesting and dynamic.
That 1:48 came all of a sudden, felt very strange, need polishing for sure.
Got the potential for sure.
Keep it up.
sapoman responds:
Thanks, I'll give your suggestions a try.
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- 2 min 20 sec
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