Melodic atmospheric piece! :)
I'd work a little more on instrument levels.
That bass ticking is a bit too loud, especially at 0:46 when lead kicks in.
1:50 is kinda weird moment and the ending has no impact. If you wanted to fade it out, maybe it good if you started fading it out even before. This felt like a sudden cut.
Honestly I really enjoyed the composition, your arrangement is pretty fine.
Little more work on production, and it's gonna be really great.
Great melodies for sure. :)
Keep it up.