The song has a great rhythm to it. Honestly, the only thing I would change is cutting out the vocals at the start since they seems very out of place, adds nothing to the song, and does not even sound like it should be part of the song. Otherwise I think you did well with this one. Has a bit of a dreamy / action sound to it that mixes well.
Flows so nicely... Great job.
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