For a first track, this is wonderful. Chord progression is on point, the track feels like it's definitely going somewhere, etc.

However, I would really encourage you to use some different drum samples— I found a ton on the internet for very cheap or free that are way better than the FL stock samples. Additionally, I would use sidechaining on basically everything, and if you're using it now, I would put way more sidechain on everything.

Good job overall; I hope to see more from you in the future!