Love the change ups here! Dynamic with good build up. The silent fraction of a second at 0:55 and 2:20 was a bit of a break in the flow a bit, for me. Maybe static or a subtle echo to carry the momentum from the previous section. I might put some bars to this, maybe some rap swag will help some with that 0.2 seconds of deafening silence. Solid work Akaruhime!