Add some hi-pass to that bass to separate it from the rest of the mix a little, it'll help provide the jumping effect with the higher stuff you've got playing off the beat. I think I'd also add one quieter layer to the bass, an octave higher than the highest one you have in there right now. Square wave, probably.
I'd also have added a higher synth rather than or on top of what you put in at :22.

You've got some chops for drops, man. Keep working on your form.

Oooooh I like what I'm hearing!
I had no idea you made music! As for recommendations, I'd maybe use an EQ or something of the sort to bring the bass and the.. non-bass parts (?) together a bit more. As for pacing and stuff like that, it's actually really nice. This could be developed into a really sophisticated track if the mixing and mastering are tackled the right way.
I especially loved that buildup at the end. The kick is a little strong, but the way that the sound carries through and picks up is really nicely done!
Giving a track variety and balance sounds like an oxymoron, but that's what makes music production fun. Just keep that in mind in case you get discouraged at all.
I'm probably not the most informed person when it comes to stuff like this, but don't hesitate to ask for help or for feedback if you end up getting stuck. Keep it up. :)

Imma make a layout later ;)