i would try to avoid supporting cymatics, they steal from other producers and try to (poorly) recreate peoples sounds from their own songs
plus they are not meant to be made into a full song, the samples they sell are for you to mix with your own stuff which is hard to do depending on what samples you get, much easier just to make your own samples ;p

i feel like you could have done more with the vocals but goodnuff

that snare (:30) should be EQed a little better, it sounds like you cut out the lowmid section and boosted the high end
the snare at :50 sounds really butchered, and pitched really weird
its a pretty decent song but i feel like you could have done more with the vocals, like maybe cut them up and threw them all over the place to help make some additional FX
the vocals and drums were my only issues,
other than that it was a nice mixdown

gg m8 i r8 3/5