This one has some good attention because they are interesting and unique in there own way and style, so props to you for this one. You have a nice beat here starts off slow but that was part of the build up and that worked the whole piece could be longer as this one was a tad short but still pretty entertaining and a good tune if you ask me. You have a good vibe and style here and I will check out more of what you offer, It was different but thats what I enjoyed about it.
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Make this longer. it was sort of on the short side.