Lovely piece
Now here was a lovely piece and it starts off great just some nice clean and high quality stuff that really came together as a whole, I am un-familuar with your work but if the rest is like this you have an instant fan, Now not sure what we can improve from here as this is a pretty solid piece, and honestly I think you have it down perfectly, so no changes needed. anyways great stuff. so all things come to an end so does this review, but not before I have to say that it was a pleasure, to hear your sound workon this one, so notbad with this one. This was actually one of the Finest tracks I have seen in a good week atleast, so nice effort here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now not sure what we can improve from here as this is a pretty solid piece, and honestly I think you have it down perfectly, so no changes needed.
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