This was interesting

And here was an interesting piece, I like the variation in this, I do think you need to have some parts slow down so you can build them up again, you have a nice piece here and it seems to stand on its own with some decent style and flavor so nice job there. And as this tune comes to an end I must say it was pretty decent, not sure what to improve on it but I enjoyed this piece and really look forward to more of this style soon, anyways great work here. Not much more I can say, exceptihope to see more stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slow down and build up points would be nice.

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