I really like the lyrics and guitar here, and the vibe overall... feels melancholy but grand, ancient, inspiring, a simple story told in a surprisingly forthcoming way. When it started out I didn't really hear all the words, but either you gain clarity as you go or I get better at hearing. I like the the flow of the words, not all like traditional song, but jumpy and emphasized in a way that seems to play with a melody of its own alongside the instruments. Really nice tune. Feels like I could just keep looping this over and over... it definitely does have a Wonderwall feeling too, now that I read it! Great work. You have a perfect voice for this type of story-telling music too.