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Pretty good! I feel like your melodies could have been more coherent. I can hear a few notes that sound off-scale. The piano is dark and evil. I could have cut off the tail of that kick sample (and cut off the high frequencies). Also, your bass doesn't just have to be a sine wave. You can layer another wavetable on top of it and low pass it. It'll create a much fuller sound.
Good work so far though. Keep it up!
Thank you so much for this very constructive review. As I mentionned it, it was a track that I made a long time ago, so I just added one part and uploaded it. I'll remember your advices for my next tracks ! ;)
Oooooh!!! Sensei! I'm sooooo glad to see you again!
Such a spooky song though, just how i like it, really great atmosphere.
Haha, thank you very much ! ;) It's just an old track I wanted to get rid of.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
EdKempeper 
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