The beginning is very nice. The buildups have too much reverb though, and they cause it to sound like white-noise. The "voices" in the drop sound too off-key, so they don't really match the rest of the song.

Has potential!! ;)

This is pretty cool, I like the drum sounds, the harmony is nice too. I found that the little chunk of melody that plays at 1:11 and in other places clashes with the harmony a little in my opinion, I think it was probably the use of a major 6th interval in a minor key whilst the harmony would have suited a minor 6th a little more, that's entirely personal preference though, good job ^^

This is amazing..