Listened to this back in 2020 forgot it ever since then lol

Neat drop.

Wait I meant. Burger.

Dear Dovax,
Many people will disagree but so far this is your best song and even though it is only 2 minutes long I've been trying to make a GD layout or the level! My account on GD is irelandian and if you ever play Geometry Dash then go check me out! I like making levels and I spend most of my freetime listening to music or building/playing levels! :D

Sincerely,
Ian

Very dissapointing, this just sounds rushed, unpolished and random af, melodies that lack rhythmic coherence, with a very weak and messy drop, without counting the huge copypaste you made there, this just... Could be a lot better, considering how good your other tracks are. By the other hand, the sound design is actually very good, the production and mixing are nice, but the composition and arrangement, bad.
The problem with the composition in the drop is that dubstep drops are mostly based in the first chord of the chord progression, but if you do that it will sound generic af, i see that you were trying to make something different, but the offbeat chords in there sounded messy and out of place, just try to make it more powerful, changing that snare, with a snare with more tail and a punchy transient, also adding some fast hihats, making the basses a lot fatter, larger and with a more interesting rhythm because the rhythm of them is boring and repetitive, add more variation, make a better transition between the drop and the breakdown, with a lead fill, and more impacts, because it's just white noise.

To make variation in the break try adding a new melody, with a new lead, and different chords maybe. Just keep the listener interested adding variations, maybe a key change, or making it faster, i know you can make something wayy better than this, this isn't your 100%.

For some reason, this remided me of the music in Crash: Mind Over Mutant xd, the name of the track fits pretty well with its mood though.

Overall: 3/5
Production: 4/5
Arrangement: 2/5
Composition: 3/5
Sound Design: 4/5
Atmosphere: 3/5
Replay: 2/5

TOTAL: 3/5 Stars

(chips compo styled stats lol)

Great :O