Interesting, say you wouldn't be influenced by neo-tonality and neo-classical music like Liebermann would you? Personally, I would've uploaded the three passages as three separate loops. It's obviously too abrupt a changes to include as a song song without some sort of interlude.

The first passage was sweet. Piano and continuo in the sweet key of Dmaj is lovely. Then all of a sudden oriental inspired ensemble in Bb, not my taste but it seemed fine (again not my style music so I can't say much). The final passage sounds like the development section to a chamber group concerto with some jazz inspired pizz. bass.

It's good music. Perhaps I don't like the way it was presented. Definitely continue to hone your craft. You're creative for sure.