Sorry for the slow response! I like the gritty synth at the beginning, but it sounds a tad harsh at the treble end. At :19, the kick is very heavy on the sub-bass, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it probably contributes to the peaking problems you have at :38. Newgrounds' new visualizer system actually makes it a lot easier to tell when your project is too loud. From :38 to 1:16 and again from 1:55 to 2:14, there are distinct flat lines at the height of the audio waveform, which is a sign that you need to eliminate some tones in those instruments, or simply lower the master channel volume. Otherwise, your track will sound really distorted, and could also damage the sound systems of people who listen to it. I think this piece is really well-structured, and I like the phasing synths you have sprinkled throughout. That said, I would've liked to hear some smoother transitions, especially at :38, 1:17, and 1:36. Adding some drums could help smooth over some of these transitions. The part at 2:16 is fun - that instrument that kind of sounds like an electric guitar adds a lot to the character of the piece. Overall, I think my biggest complaint here is still the clipping. I can tell that you're getting better, though. Keep it up, man! ;)