the start is a bit boring like RemileOduen said, but around the 1minute mark it is pretty good, the vocals makes it a bit bad, especially when it is louder. the ending with is around 1:40 is really good! this song reminds me of frums for some reason lol
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Haven't made anything like this so I thought I'd change it up. I originally was going for something cinematic, but thought about speeding it up through the process. Some tweaks here and there... this is what came up.
BusanBlack responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism. I agree with you that the vocals just don't seem to fit in. This is, having heard it for the first time in months if not years. I should probably remake this song to be more fitting to my current skill.
The intro was a tad... boring or something. The middle and ending part were okay. (damn, I NEED those time marks!)
BusanBlack responds:
Hey, no joke, thank you for the feedback. I don't really get any actual criticism so I'm never sure what to improve or reduce when it comes to my own music through another's ears. Appreciate it.
Also. I'm not quite sure what you mean by time marks. Are you talking about the BPM? Let me know.
-Lux
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