welp, ignore Hamtaro, he's just a hater.
try to stay below the volume limit. there should be a little meter somewhere that shows how many decibels beneath or above the limit you are.
otherwise, I was laughing when I heard this!
I LIKE TACOS. HAH. I LIKE TACOS.
you will get better eventually, if you keep doing music!
your bro, Artii

Fucking hell! Remove this! This is a terrible song, I don't think this is even a song! You just used a bunch of samples and mixed them together and whispered loudly into your mic "I LIKE TACO'S". No one cares, learn how to make music before you post stuff and think it will be good...