Best song on all of NG
end of fucking SROTY
Ahh, much better...kinda
It's still pretty much the same, only you started without the beat in the first part...umm, that's it, otherwise, I think the guy below me must've covered everything else...
27s devlopement ; 2:40 of a 4s loop. NEEDS VARIETY
You've got some tight beats, but you really need to do more with it all round.
I enjoyed the way it started off - with the various layers being introduced. After around 27s though, it all sounds exactly the same.
I like the faint 3-note melody in the background. Only noticed that after around a minute and a half, but I realised upon inspection that it was there all along...
Anyway, this is cool, but why you'd submit a tune with 27s of development and 3 minutes of a 4s loop is beyond me.
Why don't you take the 4s loop, then make that into a loop and submit it as that? It sounds like that could work brilliantly for some game level or a menu.
If you want it to be a tune, you've got to have waaaaay more diversity. As an example of something with variation, I was listening to NGAPRadio and this is what came on after your tune:
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.