I dont really like it. Idk why. Ill try and explain. The drums are really bad and i cant hear any sidechaining, or at least, its pretty weak. Theres no melody to it, just the basis of an arp with some sound that sounds like its from sonic.exe playing out of tune in the background. Another thing is that the drop is actually the quietest part, turn up the volume there aswell. You have to really think about where the notes go, theyre so scrambled and painful to listen to, also, what did you use for the drop, it sounds pretty basic, some serum here and there couldnt go a miss, but if you dont have that there are plenty of alternatives, i hope this helps you improve, have a good day :)
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I have decided to start a new set of songs called "X". This will generally be reconstructions of older songs I have made and make them into something different, and here is an example of what I will be dealing with. These will at first be experiments, and I will see where I can go from there. These songs are not going to be my usual songs that take me an accumulative of around 2 to 5 hours. These may take me at least 15 hours or more.
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For my first song for "X", I decided to reconstruct Dubstep Machine and tried to get a different result, and hopefully somewhere along the area of it being significantly better. This took me an accumulative of 17 hours to make over a span of 4 days (5 hours for Day 1, 3 hours for Day 2, 6 hours for Day 3, 3 hours for Day 4). To be honest how to compare this to my original version of the song, this song is a lot better, and the quality is a lot better.
I love its simplicity! But I suggest you to add more oomph to you kick bass. Make it as loud as nuclear bombs! Just kidding. And also, before the drop after the build ups, leave some two beats before your basses enter. Other than that, it is fantastic! This piece reminds me of GameBoy and Atatri!
Kysertron responds:
You asked for kicks that sound more like nuclear bombs? You can check a remake here: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/802804
The kicks (well, actually they are part of the background FX :P) are a LOT mroe like nuclear bombs. ;)
Hahaha I really brought a lot of nostalgia to hear this topic haha.
The truth is I have to say that you have improved. Now that you put more effort to your songs osea to be 5 or 6 days to make a song the truth is an achievement my friend.
I hope you succeed in music. I hope you are dj / producer like the others.
Lucky, my friend.
PS: This song will do remixada you want or not: D
Kysertron responds:
Yes, I have improved within the time I made the original version of Dubstep Machine. Just recently, I made the use of making LMMS dubstep. My first official dubstep was Summer in 2057, which was actually made almost a couple months ago.
P.S. I would love somebody to remix this song! :D
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