It has great composition ideas inside. What its really lacking is variety. It has the premise, but doesnt go all the way with it. Repeating one and same bass sound in the drop further proves it. I do like the emphasis you put on soundeffects. Also the Excision vibe i get from it is really awesome. Mixing is mostly on point as well (exceptions being the melodic parts)

I would give you 4.5 but lack of variety just crushes it down to 3.

Like the ideas, just sad that you didnt go all the way..

[FGS]