Good... I say continue.
Hmm. Creative rhythms, I like this! It's a head-bobber. I'll get right to the bulk of the review, ok?
Your melody's great, but you could build on it a LOT more over the course of eight measures. I love the synth you've chosen for it, too! No suggestions here other than building on it more.
Harmonies. Well, the one that you have is good, synths and all. Nothing to suggest here, since you only have one harmony. You're going to need more throughout the song, of course. ;)
Drumming is great in this song. It kinda reminds me of what I used to do, creative rhythms with the kicks, but keeping the hihats on the offbeats. Those hihats, actually, I find a bit weak... so you should make those louder. And the kicks - try to stick to one hit every beat, on the beat, but it's ok to have some variation every four or eight measures. Your samples, however, are great! I also need to point out that I hear reverse cymbals - follow up on that with a cymbal at the end! ;)
This song would almost have a DnB-ish attitude, if it weren't for your percussion, which is fairly square if you don't count the rhythms for the kicks.
That's it... I say continue on it! Great job with this... if you do continue, I'm looking forward to the full version. Keep up the good work. :)
Thanks Karco. This means a lot to me. I can really learn from reviews like this.