Huh, you're submitting often...
All right. Well, here's a review for you anyway.
The song starts... well, not audibly pleasant, I have to say that. The synths don't complement each other. Worse still is that string-sounding synth that comes in, and it's horribly off-key, in a different one, actually, from the rest of the song.
There isn't really a melody in this song... if you'd like to consider that string synth one, I'll tell you this - send me the .flp and I can change the key to match. And... if it actually IS in the right key... you need to find a better string synth. XD
Your harmonies don't complement each other at all. I could see it working if you had chosen better synths but your synth choice right now is giving me a headache. >_< Keep trying here.
Percussion... well, it's decent. I can't hear them because of how low the harmonies are, though... I do hear an unoriginal clap sample, though. That's all I can hear.
You know... I wouldn't really call this DnB. It feels a bit slow for that. I would have submitted this under Techno.
Not much else to suggest on this song... I'm disappointed. I'd say you leave it as is and start work on something new. If you really want to continue working on this, I would continue once I'm a lot better, and then I'd start from scratch. Otherwise I'd leave it behind for good. That's my opinion, though... I'd suggest waiting for a few other reviewers before making a final decision. Now, here's hoping they come... for your past three songs, I've been your only reviewer. XD Keep trying.
OHHHH BUG AWF!
LOzzLe! What's up Karco? Sorry I didn't get back to you on this review. Amazing. I usually respond in minutes O_O. Thanks for the GREAT review as usual.
*Hands Karco BEST REVIEW OF (whateverweekthisis) and my babies that he immediately grabs and consumes*