While this is a promising song, I find that there are 2 separate issues with this piece of music, the first is that I feel this is a fairly generic piece of music, but that just will just fix itself with experience. The real problem with this track that stops me from giving it a high score is that it doesn't really go anywhere, there isn't any climax to the song, and this one really feels like it needs one to bring it all together. Either way, it definitely isn't bad, just flawed in a couple of ways.