Interesting.

The beginning I found your kick had too much sub. I'd aim for either a volume change or make it tighter, but it already sounds compressed.

Your chorus was nice really, came together well.

B section was somewhat musically interesting. nevertheless you didn't go off the beaten track with a complete new idea. it was coherent.

2nd chorus was better then the first. The kick didn't seem too in my face and I ended up loving the drums more some reason.

What I want you to do in the future:
Give your sub some dynamics & and watch your levels.

add more some drum variations. Your 2nd chorus could have used something other then fills and kick snare repeats. try ghost notes. Make the kick have some rhythm to it (its already in your face and tight!)

For 8 months. Its great. But ya dude, finish it and move on. That lifestyle sounds stressful.

Awesome job!

- Nick