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2 years since my last post. I'm still making music lol. Check out my soundcloud at soundcloud.com/mastinmusic

I post a bit more regularly there. I also stream music production sometimes at twitch.tv/mastinmusic so check me out there too if you want.

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While this piece is less well produced than your more recent work, it has a lot going for it. You made a good choice for the synths here, they gel together well and give the piece a certain warmth, forming a wall alongside the bass synth. This caries the song.
At times there is a lead melody and I've always had a thing for wide, wide arps. I always associate them with sci-fi and I'm obssessed with that type of atmosphere.

I think you could have made this song more catchy at times, maybe by bringing in a strong lead melody to give the song more direction or a stronger sense of structure with a more obvious chorus section.

TimerClock14 responds:

Hey thanks for the comments! This song definitely gave me a lot of trouble in the mix department as you can hear. I'm also right there with you on your criticism of lacking a catchy lead. While I dont think that all songs need a catchy lead I think this is definitely a song that could have benefited greatly from one and a bit more traditional composition overall to accommodate.

Really appreciate these comments and I'll put the feedback towards making my next song even better!

Hecking great song!

Qool

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Sep 28, 2017
12:30 AM EDT
Genre
Dance
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10.1 MB
4 min 26 sec
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