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This is my first proper try at Soundtrap. Of course, this was my first try at a decent Dubstep track. Please tell me what I could have done better in the comments.

My SoundCloud - https://soundcloud.com/dj_locked_music
My YouTube - https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCDnUfKD8F97E5BRfvD54d7w

If one of the links don't work, please tell me.

P.S. There will NOT be a full version since it got deleted (corruption problems). Sorry about that.

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Ramn0

2017-09-16 15:23:08

Bass at its raw is very solid. i like it

However, the melody is a bit off. It just doesnt feel right. I advise you to recheck your melodies and fix the issues in final release.

Overall i think im getting down to this. Keep it up

[FGS]

LockedGaming responds:

Thanks for the response. This is my first crack at the Soundtrap music maker so everything might be slightly dodgy. As I said in the "Author's Comments" I can't get the track back to finish or edit. Thanks for the comment and I will take this into concideration.

If my next few songs have a bad melody then please pardon it.