Hey! Im here to see what you got this time m8!

So at the beginning of the song... that chip-beat man I love it! Right after you intoduced some melodies I didn't quite liked, but you managed to make them sound good for the track. I suggest adding a "plot" to the song, its just my personal vision. Man the chipstep you introduced at 2:25 its super cool.
You should make different variations to the melody to make the track feel catchy!

Overall, I liked the song... the composition and your mastering skills are good!

Keep it up :)

Although Im not a fan of 8bit/LoFi music, i can see this one being a favorite of people who do like this style. The way you put it together is fantastic and all of the sounds work; none of them are off. I particularly like the percussions and how you did them. Really impressive and musically good. 5/5 for arrangment, 3.5/5 for my particular enjoyment but nonetheless...

SORRY :/