Now that's a five stars song! You still gotta learn to develop your songs more because your biggest problem definitely is repetitiveness. And sound quality is a bit off, try to fix it, please.
Good job on this one, keep progressing!

Hmm... I don't know why, but I like this song, quite much actually. It sounds like something LunarSimg would make to be honest. I like the melody too.

Also waiting for gd comments :v