Yeahh, d'n'b like DIESEL BOY.
You almost got it.
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More variety in everything. Sequences are bit long and monotonous.
Bass melody need more "happening". You should try with Pentatonic scales, in Minor.
For example, with Arabic Pentatonic scale you can get very Sad or Horrific melodies.
Obviously You almost Mastered Production and Rhythm, now you Must ;) learn some Music Theory.
Don't be lazy ;) I know, learning is painful.
It helped Me a lot, but I'm to lazy to make music :(
Anyway, Good Job, nice track.

intro feels too long with nothing in it
drop has next to no buildup
the track feels sorta "scattered" if you catch my meaning. the bass is very sparse. left me wanting more bass and less intro

not your finest but its not trash
the second half is better tbh
cymbals felt like they were cut off though. dunno if thats intentional

very nice ;)