I don't understand Lo-Fi of course (I don't have a passion for it), but I think that this experiment needs to be turned into a full-fledged track, I assure you.

Hi bro really cool music i wanted to ask you if i can use you're song in a Geometry Dash level(sorry if i wrote something wrong I am from Romania and I am bad at English)

ableton is not good for lofi beats unless you have a custom batch of lofi instruments and lofi piano fl studio is good to

kinda don't like the melody but the beat and timing are perfect, could change some pace or try experimenting with some stuff

Try:
-making stuff more atmospheric
-adding more effects [ personally like using large hall ]
-don't make things repetitive
-always concentrate on one thing first then move on because it seemed to me that u were going for like lofi plus dubstep

that's all for now, Good luck with ur future project

love this :3