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NGAUC 2k17 Final Round submission (underdog)!


My skin is covered with a shell

It's one that i can’t break

Though flesh it may be bound

A way out, it must be found

I don’t want to let your words break through

Though warm as they may be

The blizzard remains unphased

My shell it hardens

Through skin its sewn in

This heat is the last I’ll feel this way

Juvenile years they’ve gone away

And through the turning of the weather

My shell thickens and turns to leather

Words and petty influence, act as flaky agents

And through a field of grass

Not a single blade remains unphased

A flame has risen

Burn all within it

Deceivingly endless, this elaborate labyrinth

In the form of a solid flesh prison

Alive or diseased, it’s one in the same

Through this maze I seem to wander, for the rest, for the rest of my days

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I like the distorted puttering at the beginning and the tranquil guitar at :06. The vocals are powerful, but a little too dry. I’d suggest using some more reverb and chorus effects. The lyrics themselves are also rather powerful and entertaining. I think you would’ve been well-advised to add a little more to the instrumentation, though - it lacks variety and direction until around the 2-minute mark, and could use some drums, bass, and other harmonies to give it some more drive and contrast. I like the new direction the piece is taking by around 2:47, but at the same time I think you could’ve integrated the two halves of this piece a little better. Your production quality has improved a lot since last year, but I still wish the drums and acoustic guitar came through a little clearer at 3:33. The solo at the end was very well done - intense, soulful, and climactic. Overall, this is really strong work. I love the energy and the 90s rock vibe. Despite the slow pace and dry vocals, the piece comes together well. Keep it up, Verbicidemusic. ;)

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Nice work. I like the slow build. The Mogwai wail at 3:30 is awesome!

Hi, Im here to retribute your nice review.. i love the droning guitar sound, and your economic instrumentation in the first 3 minutes helped the lethargic post rock mood, I always saw post rock as very incisive, straight forward and unambiguous despite the average song length, so your effective minimalism works great. The second guitar track in the part with the snare was sweet, it plays the melodies you imagine when you hear the chords throughout the first part of the song. The climax is what I expected and it's good aswell. Good luck on the competition.

Credits & Info

3.53 / 5.00

Aug 10, 2017
1:12 AM EDT
File Info
4.7 MB
5 min 7 sec

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