everybody has to start somewhere, so here's advice for you:
- get youself some samplepacks. fl studio's stock drums really don't sound good
- learn about EQing and sidechain. this will save your butt when doing stuff like this
- give the song some more structure, add some percussion or fill rhythms with foleys or similar sounds, depending on the sound you're trying to create
i hope this will help you :3
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