You made a great eerie feeling song, but the higher pitch guitar just seems totally off beat and doesn't fit the eerie pad sounds at all. It sounds like it's totally out of place, while the pad and bass are making an awesome ambient song.
I would love to hear it without the guitar. Maybe a different instrument at a slower speed to match the bass and pad's slow paces.
I see the potential in it so I do want to give it 4/5 even with the big problem I have with it. Well done =)