The riff at the beginning is really catchy, but I think the synth you used sounds a bit unpolished and generic. You could’ve used a smoother transition into :12, and the snare sounds a bit thin here. You also have some rough transitions at :49, 1:14, 1:26, 3:31, etc. I like the more laid-back vibe at 1:14, although the sub-bass is a little overpowering. The part at 2:05 was great for some structural relief, and I appreciated the strong melodic content at 2:23 - a long time coming, those powerful melodies. Overall, the production quality is clean, and I’ve always appreciated how crisp and clear the drums are in your music. The piece has an A-B-A form overall, but the most climactic and cathartic section is the B section, which I found a little off-putting. You also don’t do a lot with the second A section that you didn’t do in the first one. Overall, I think my most pressing complaint is the connectivity in this piece. I’d encourage you to try using more drum fills, dynamic contrast, phrasing, and automation to make the flow of your piece smoother. Right now, the structuring is a bit choppy. Overall, though, strong work with the production, catchiness, and mood. Keep at it, Metallica1136! ;)
NIce Bass i like it :)
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