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(The seventh song of 'The Archer Girl', telling stories with the song)

What happened next after the "Our Nostalgic Days"?

Listen to the previous episode, "Our Nostalgic Days" here : http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/754943

Listen to the next episode, "Strive and Survive" here : http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/763428

"The siren rings through the open dark air. You and Air stops playing with the swing. Ari holds up her arrow and her bow to start the hunting for the incoming zombies. You get ready with your small laser gun you kept in your pocket.

Just then, an enormous bear-like creature the size of an elephant with huge pipes that fumes out its breath rambles towards the zombies and kills it. Ari and you step back. You have never seen the creature before. And so was Ari. The huge creature roars.

"What's THAT?" Ari shouts to you.

"I don't know!" You shout back.

Just then, the creature looks at you and Ari. Its face is full of hunger. The creature licks its lips.

"Oh no..." You murmur. For now, you know that the beast will kill you and Ari too.

"Run!" Ari shouts first.

You and Ari shot right back to the base. The creature, thumping as it runs, chases you madly. Ari, panting, shots into the base's door and goes to the manager immediately. While you, after heading to the base, stands still as the soldiers moving quickly to get in their position for their second fight.

You hear the roar of the creature again. Ari comes back to you. She quietly pulls you through the main corridor and onto the stairs, to lead you to your and Ari's battle position. You hear the boom sound coming nearby. You hear the rocks falling down onto the floor. The base is being destroyed. You feel the ground shake.

"Quick!" You hear Ari shouting.

You follow Ari. Now, you are on the top floor of the base. You can see the monster more clearly. It destroys another building of the base. The building crashes into pieces. There a loud screaming coming from the bottom of the base.

You look at Ari. She looks really furious. She was staring hard, with angry eyes at the beast.

"You!" Ari shouts.

The monster turns to Ari and you. You immediately hold your gun and takes aim at the monster. You fire your weapons. Great steams of laser shots from your gun and to the monster. The monster growls with pain, but it came only for a second. Ari holds up her bow, with her arrows on it.

She now releases the string. The arrow shots through the bow and into one of the monster's eye.

The monster growls and stares hard at Ari. You, astonished by her great skill, look at her. Just then, the monster roars and tries to grab you. You run away as hard as you could, but it scratches your right arm. Your weapon falls to the floor. You scream with pain. You've never felt this pain before. You fall to the floor, and watch Ari.

Ari, moving more closely to the monster, takes aim again and shoots instantly. It shoots into the another eye. The monster roars again with pain. It backs away a little and falls down. Ari, now running towards to the very end of the top floor, jumps and flew in the air, shooting at the monster's chest.

With a great force, it pushes into the monster's heart.

After the battle is done, Ari grabs you by your left hand, and helps you get up.

"Let's get your wound cured," Ari says, "and restore this big mess." "

Composed, Mixed and Story by Jessie Yun
Created with GarageBand (iPhone Version)

Cover artist : BelleDeesse
Link : http://www.wallpaperup.com/98283/Tomb_Raider_2013_Archers_Warriors_Rain_Games_Girls_rain.html

I made this just for fun, but if you have any comments/review/advice for this song, I'd love to hear it!