== This is an official NGUAC Review ==
This is a cool start to a song. I definitely like the core melodic motif and the associated chord progression. However I have to admit that it's certainly far too repetitive as it stands right now - the song really only has two sections, as you mentioned. Furthermore, the mixing really needs some love, as all the elements need to have their volumes adjusted (the piano is way too loud, the crash is too dry, and in general the climax mix simply has too many instruments in it. Try using fewer that pull their weight more!
All in all, a cool start to a song. Try varying it up and going a little more minimalistic next time! =)
Mini-scores (not used to calculate final score in any way - just so you know what needs improvement):
Sound Design: 1+/4
I definitely agree with the things you pointed out! I will improve. See you next year!
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