First off, the intro seems a little bland. Would highly recommend making it more detailed or add something to catch the listener's interest. I like the arpeggiating pad you brought in at the beginning, too.
I think the sound design needs improvement at 1:25, especially because you can hear crackling from the lead. The sound at the end is cool, but sounds monophonic. I suggest panning the oscillators/operators different directions while still keeping that really neat flange sound.
Another thing I think is this should've had more of a gradual or less immediate ending, such as filtering stuff down or adding on a crash.
To me at least, you're song is a little catchy and even a little satisfying. Good job!
This is the most feedback i've ever received on a single track. Thank you for all of the insight. I really wish I would have spent more time on this track, I really sort of slapped it together during some procrastination time on a school day.
Its ok, good music specially for background music because drops are almost no there, good mix
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