I really like it! The way it sounds is kinda distorted in a way that makes it sound good. Thumbs up to you! :D
All you literally did was add a loop over it and fit it to the bpm. I like the original more
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
* Remix of a third-party piece.
Excercise caution when using it, refer to author comments / contact the author for details.