*Comments/Reviews/Advice much appreciated!*

(The fifth song of 'The Archer Girl', telling stories with the song)

What happened next after the "Back To The Base"?

Listen to the previous episode, "Back To The Base" here : http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/754164

Listen to the next episode, "Our Nostalgic Days" here : http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/754943

"The base soldiers quickly run towards their position. They each have electric guns and shotguns ready. Ari grabs your hand and pulls you through the incoming soldiers. She leads you to the weapon station and gives you an electric gun. You look at Ari. Her face is somehow angry but sad. She is still grabbing her arrow. She looks at it once. Still, her name is carved in the wood.

"Dad, I think it's time for me to do what you did."

Ari runs through another passageway and goes out of the hideout base. You follow her. You could see the zombies approaching slowly, but they are snapping their vicious teeth, fuming with toxin. With masks on, everyone shoots at the zombies. They growl and die. Ari, aiming her arrow at one of the zombies, shoots with a tremendous power. The zombie dies instantly. One zombie comes to you, growling with anger. Protected by your gas mask, you shoot your gun. He is knocked down. You start panting since you made your first small victory.

Ari, now with tears in her eyes, shoots more arrows at the zombies, while soldiers shoot their guns at them. Ari pants and returns to the base as the first battle ends."

Composed, mixed and story by Jessie Yun
Created with GarageBand (iPhone Version)

Cover artist : BelleDeesse
Link : http://www.wallpaperup.com/98283/Tomb_Raider_2013_Archers_Warriors_Rain_Games_Girls_rain.html

I made this just for fun, but if you have any comments/review/advice for this song, I'd love to hear it!